Comments : Picture In A Frame

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    Wow i like this alot,
    reminds me of when i used to date someone,
    and i learnt a big lesson, and now i look back and still remeber how i felt and what happened in those times etc.
    its really good
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    A reminder that althought the past is behind us...sometimes it does return to remind us of that which was lost and the lessons taught to make us who we have become today....

    "Yet here I sit remembering,
    That love so long ago,
    One picture caused your memory,
    To blanket me like snow."

    ^funny how those pictures serve as reminders good or bad of what once was....good to look and then move on....

    Nicely written...flawless in rhyme and flow....a joy to read! Take care, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    To slip inside your memory,
    In hopes that you still ponder.

    I'll tuck you back inside the box,
    Your tattered, weathered frame,

    I like the way you write in such unique simplicity... These lines deeply touched me.. Memories are such precious things and you express it perfectly in this poem... I am truly impressed by this poem...

    A great write... 5/5!