I liked this peice. It made me smile cos I can relate so much. Lol. Great job though. The flow was kinda iffy in parts, but that didn't bring the peice down at all.

Your emotion was pure and the want that you feel is clearly expressed. I loved it all. Again, great job!
5/5

Amber..

Cute shelby and once again alec and steph broke up and i think he still ikes u so go for it or sit here and be sad and if he doent like u big whoop babe u got all the guys and he'll get jelous if u date his friend *wiink wink* lol

ily k