Nice ;)

Wow, this shows you have good character and your a strong person.
I love that. :))
Poetry is so beautiful. Putting so much emotion into it.
Whether its anger, sadness, happiness, or passion.
You can literally do them all.:)

im extremely impressed and i can't wait to read more of your poetry. <3

This was a great poem, 5*5
i loved the imagery used towards the middle of the poem, such as:
"I shall pick myself up,
from the darkened despair,
and admit to myself,
I don't like it down there"
there wasnt anything wrong that i could find, wonderful job.
Kimberly

Wow i loved the use of your words, they flowed brilliantly! your emotion was poignantly expressed in this wonderful piece! 5/5

xD Happy Thoughts xD
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

I like overwhelming positivity that runs wild through this piece.
Written in a good way, whole poem holds intense emotions and I can relate to it.
It rhymes and flows nicely from the beginning to the end.