B E A utiful.

such a shame that its all 2 true

Sad.
Well constructed.
5/5

Wow. im speechless again. i LOVE ur writing. this is so well put together. its brilliant.
xx

Ooh i liked this too!...umm i saw two mistakes that u shuld consider revising.....

#1

"Drink after drink.
Bottle after bottle sizes.
The alcohol level
Start to rises."
^^ i think it would make better sence if u said
'starts to rise.'
just a suggestion

#2

"Later you die
From loss of too much blood
You lie there soaked
In a thickened flood"
^^ i think u shuld say on the second sentence.
'from loss of blood.'
u automatically know its too much, i think its just adding non-needed information.'

hehe...great job tho!..loved it!
Aly