Comments : Missing You

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is such a sweet poem, so refreshing, full of love...beautiful words...loved it.

    keep writing

    i hv had these feelings and its just great to even imagine those days

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by hanisah

    I like da last and sec0nd last line...sweet...

  • 16 years ago

    by Caroline

    I have had a long distance relationship, so i can relate to this. the last verce is... just wow. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by LvSmlygrl14

    That was great.:).Just keep hanging in there.;0

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Rhymes and flows. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aingfillyhine

    Last 2 lines was a good ending

  • 16 years ago

    by darkangel

    I can really relate to this poem its great

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxLiSETHxXx

    I like it. And i can definitely relate 2 it.

  • 16 years ago

    by olivia

    That is nice...it made me think about ma exx...... ;-(

  • 16 years ago

    by Torey Hafford

    Thats hot i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Top rated poem, nice work, this was excellent, had so much emotion filled to the brim.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    This one is nice as well =] I really like the last stanza.

    "My heart aches
    With the pain of missing you
    I stare up at the sky every night
    Wondering if you are looking too"

    Sometimes I do that too, just look at a random star and wonder if he see's it too. Nice how you put your emotions into this poem.
    5/5 again
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Han84

    Hey mate sorry long time no chat.. bn so busy with wk and my lappy being messing about... brilliant poem sweety.. so who u
    writing this about hun xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Love this poem
    it makes me sad
    but i like
    keep writting