Debbie,
Absolutely beautiful!!! It was a very heartbreaking write and you never cease to amaze me with your words. I am in utter awe of your poem. The flow was perfect, and everything about the poem was mesmerizing. Fantastic Job!

Where once a beauty did reside
Wind carries lonely cries
In darkness I am forced to hide
Turn everything inside
I long for you to rescue me
Embrace this heart and set me free
I long for you
I long for you
Restore the love that used to be

this is the best stanza i hv gone thro in last so many years, its really so touchy...beautiful write dear friend.

all the best and take care

Debbie
This is so beautiful. I love this form and you mastered it. You bring so much into each piece you write. Excellent imagery, flow and word choices make this into a fantastic piece.

Where once a beauty did reside
Wind carries lonely cries
In darkness I am forced to hide
Turn everything inside
I long for you to rescue me
Embrace this heart and set me free
I long for you
I long for you
Restore the love that used to be

This stanza just found it's way right into my heart. My wish for so long. Still I wait, Still I wait......
~Bravo~~Bravo~
Love Cindy

Wow Deb.. kinda speechless!!
This whole piece was so hunting.. breathtakingly beautiful.. awesome imagery!!.. Well done!

Wow, wow, wow...
You did excellent job with this form. The poem deeply touched me, it is truly great and filled with so many emotions. I can relate to this piece in so many ways. Whole poem contains fantastically created imagery and atmosphere filled with the tones of deep sadness. Breathtaking piece.

Another gem of a poem.......

You are cindy i must say are both very creative, what a great poem to well done xox sam

Love your mind..i love it all

The flow and word choice are very well done. Heartbreaking and brilliant! Excellent job!

Such a sad story being told within the thsi piece, you portray the despair and absolute desolateness the body mind and soul are left in when love departs.

You really hit your point home with powerfully placed metaphors and harsh images. This is a poem I could read over and over again.

Wonderful work.

~Pete.

Beautifully sad