You have strong emotions in this poem, and it really shines out. Keep up the good work.

~Ashley

Nice poem, i enjoyed while reading it...i was thinking about you today i was like "i didn't email her for a long time, is there anything new in her life?" lol
so how are you?

Heya great poem
this is an awesome poem
you dont need tips from me
i need tips from you
i like how you repeated the first line in every verse it gave it more power good job:D:D

keenan