Comments : Final Goodbye

  • 16 years ago

    by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel

    It's hard putting up a false front, and not having the person you love most see the real you. This poem was well written and I believe your last stanza ended it well.

    Complex

  • 16 years ago

    by Cliche Fairytale Ending

    I can totally relate rught now i like this guy and im scared to tell him and show him the real me because thts how i keep my gurad up i dont let anyone to close so they can hurt me.

  • 16 years ago

    by hadia

    So sad.
    but real good poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow, very sad and powerful. 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow, very powerful! gave my a shiver that kept me reading, 5/5
    xoxo
    ~me~

  • 15 years ago

    by TeXAmoXGummieX

    Loved it way better than mine will ever be
    --XxEmOxXGoThXxGiRlXx--