Comments : Life

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    Pretty cool. Keep it up the good work.

    -Amy

  • 12 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Aww mina, this was such a gorgeous poem, it was just so beautiful and sweet, and even reading it made me smile. it flowed so strongly as well and it gives the reader some hope while reading it. 5/5
    gaby

  • 12 years ago

    by Im So OVER IT

    You have some really good stuff..I love all your poems. They are very real and very deep...Keep on writing...Vot For u...plz Vote for me...

  • 12 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem was excellent XD
    Great job 5/5
    I really enjoyed reading it, your a good writter ^^

  • 12 years ago

    by XBroKenXyetXHeReX

    Really good...really like this..!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Brian Yazzie

    I like this.. i mean it is real..and thats what poetry is about..keep on writting gurl..

  • 11 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I agree with Rooe - space makes space within each thought. It lets a poem pause and breath. Each story will be told, you're right about that, tell your story well and may your passion find perfect blank pages to fill with your own tales. Peace - keep up the good writes.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kalgalath

    Thats a good flowing poem. wow.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah

    Well written & beautifully penned ...5/5 great job, keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by SiLeNt

    -=pulls out a flower-=
    *starts picking off the petels*
    =-she loves me-=-)
    -=(she loves me not-=(
    =-she loves me-=-)
    -=(she loves me not-=(
    -=she loves me-=-)
    -=(she loves me not-=(

  • 11 years ago

    by SiLeNt

    She loves me ^.^