Aww mina, this was such a gorgeous poem, it was just so beautiful and sweet, and even reading it made me smile. it flowed so strongly as well and it gives the reader some hope while reading it. 5/5
I agree with Rooe - space makes space within each thought. It lets a poem pause and breath. Each story will be told, you're right about that, tell your story well and may your passion find perfect blank pages to fill with your own tales. Peace - keep up the good writes.