I really REALLY liked this POEM! it was very good! U did A very nice job! 5/5

I was once in this position when I was just about the same age as you, and I never thought I'd ever lose the pain and the love I felt for her. But trust me as time wares on and you learn to love again, it will all just be a memory of yesterday. It's a good lesson to learn and it will only make you stronger and wiser. Excellent job and thanks so much for the comment. 5/5 GG23

The ending is almost out of place but you used the right words to make it work. You used good expressive words. I did want to point out that the rhyme scheme of the second stanza is different from the rest of the poem. It throws it off just a little in the beginning. I still give it a 5/5, though. <3

Naww this is a cute poem, I love the wording you put into this piece. How you started it is something to remember. 5/5 Keep up the good work xoxo

Aw. this poem is beautiful.

Hey Andrew! Sorry for not checking out your poems sooner... wow, an amazing job! Just as always =D I hope to hear from you again soon, keep it up hun! 5/5 <3 <3

~Kayla~

I have just one suggestion, you should try to use some more original words to create more powerful atmosphere, try to create some metaphorical unique image, or to simply express your emotions with some different words. I truly enjoy in your work but in many of your poems you use -strife- or -fight, and your rhyming also should be more unique. I trying to say that you must expand your wording and vocab.

Other than that really interesting poem, I adore your starting idea for it. It could be better with some metaphors and other words but anyway you did good job and few lines are excellent the way they are.
This is just my opinion, of course I really don't want to offend you or something like that.

Beautifully expressed!
although the title needs to be changed there is a mispell
"in love and obcessed"
should be
"in love and obsessed"

5/5

I really like this.
I feel your pain.
you write really good poems.
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OMG!!!!!!!! That's sooo good.... Sad sort of but excellent

Nice.