Comments : Bowing To The Wind. (Haiku)

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Love the imagery of the dancing trees! Nicely done! Take care, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Steve
    This is an awesome Haiku :) Love the title. Your words paint such a vivid image.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Steven beautiful Haiku you've penned here.

    See the branches bow
    ^^^
    By using see as your first word .... You have painted such a picture of beauty with just three short lines.
    It makes me want to take a deep breath of fresh air .... and listen to the leaves rustle while they dance....
    Breathtaking !

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Very nice Steve!!!!

    You deserve a 5/5 for this one.

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Very much enjoyed this piece.. It was ever so delicate.. an wonderful write... great job

  • 16 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Steven,

    it's been so long since i read your work. Your genius shines again!

    good luck and peace
    shobhana