This is soo heartbreaking to read...a secret like that was made to be told...i'm actually really tearful after reading this because the emotions are so honest and straight from the heart....
it flows so well and is brilliant even though it nearly made me cry!!!
awesome stuff 5/5
- ali x

This was a very emotional piece. holding on is one of the hardest things to do, and you deffinatly got that point across. You're a great writer, keep up the good work. 5/5
~Forever Broken~