Comments : Dont make me go through this alone

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is another amazingly written poem. The wording and ryhm was wonderfully done. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    I can completely relate it in a way. It's absolutely beautiful the amount of emotion you put into this.
    Some of the rhyming felt forced, but it was a small part of the poem.
    Overall, it was VERY well done.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, excellently written. I loved the flow as well as the structure in this poem. You are very talented, keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe