This is very beautiful and endlessly touching, truly greatly written love poem. Very emotional piece, with the feelings expressed in a great way. You did a good job with rhymes which created great flow through the whole piece.
My favorite lines are:

-You'll always be in my heart
and nothing can ever tare us apart.
You are my world, my life it seems
your in my thoughts and all my dreams.-

Keep writing!
5/5 from me

This is very beautiful , cute, sweet and touching.
And as always nicely written, you are the best!=)...5/5
....Melody..=)

This is a very beautiful poem. Very sweet and captures how as long as you have to someone to love who loves you back it just seems like everything in life will be fine and work itself out. Lovely poem, beautiful words like that make me smile:) (5/5)

Kelly
xx

It's a cute love poem
full of appreciation and promises

good luck

Excellent poem of love! Very well written. I like all the rhymes. Well done, its beautiful.

Aww that's sweet. I hope i have the pleasure to get someone this special to me in my life. Great job.
-vino

WOW, your wife is one lucky lady. Such a beautiful love poem, full of emotion. 5/5

What a sweet one!
You are very lucky to have someone like her, and she´s very lucky to have someone like you.
Very well written
Take care

Man great job, that was very nice

Very sweet and well written! 5/5

Very good, i enjoyed it!

That was so sweet and touching. Great poem.

"You'll always be in my heart
and nothing can ever tare us apart.
You are my world, my life it seems
your in my thoughts and all my dreams."

Lovely !! Good job.

Very very nice tracy!!! i missed reading your stuff!!!

Love poem rhymes with purity, so naturally. Like this love feels so pure and natural. Nice Blend. Beautiful writing, still.
5/5

Wonderful ending. Great...I love it!!!

Wonderful ending. Great...I love it!!!

This is a very beautiful love poem. :) You did an amazing job portraying your emotions. 5/5