Geeze, your work just flows so naturally. Wow. Lol. But great job with this one. The wording added extra emotion and really gave the whole poem an extra something. Again, I love the title. Great job!
5.5

Amber..

Mother said that I could sure do better
But I couldn't hear over all my crying
Befuddlement, I promise, is a real word
I could be an accident but I'm still trying.

That was my favorite stanza, you really know how to put the emotion on the poem. This is well written and your rhyming was great. You deserve 5/5 for this!!!

I've been feeling like an accident for the longest time...

But, as time carries on I've seem to have been snapping out of it ^_^ I figure that the more I do for those around me, the more content I'll feel for my existance ^_^

Thank you for this piece and the self reflection ^_^ 5/5