This is very emotional and well written poem. Love it a lot.

The rhyming was perfect, this is very adorable, I also enjoyed the desperation story too. This is 5/5!!!

I felt the desperation. Just the amount of emotion and committment was amazing. I wouldn't say the rhyming was flawless, but I liked this poem a lot.
5/5.

What a dark, heartfelt poem. I really felt your strain in this poem from your words. I feel like this poem would be best suited in the "sad" poems section though.

Still, another very great poem!

A bit sad piece! but the emotion are totally awesome more this lines i can relate....

God, please save me from this confusing situation
I'm tired that I should live it through the slow motion
I need someone who could fixes my helpless emotion
Send me your angel to show me the right direction

i like that lines because there are times i had the same feeilngs and same thoughts like that...

impressive just keep on writing all what u feel 5/5

Yes i feel you when i younger i felt like my life going no where but down i use to get so much trouble it was crazy but the type of person i was you would never believe it so i was living two different lives so i would pray for god to like please this can't be my life...another good poem.!!...=)

Wow im speechlea....i dont know what to say...it was really good! keep it up!!!! another 5/5