Not only dark, but a bit funny, this way it definitly keeps the poem in the reader's head

"Liar liar, pants on fire
Sins are only rising higher
I know you know what is true
The only lying devil here is you.."

loved the first stanza the best but all of this poem is entirely brilliant!! 5/5 keep writing and never stop!!!

xD Happy Thoughts xD
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Hey ho! I have not commented thou in a while...
I like the menising (<--- spelt wrong?) feel to this one.
Its dark with an edge of dark humour.
I enjoyed every second of it.
Don't let the flying sheep get you while you sleep. (XD)
Kat xxx