Wow! I can tell you put a lot of emotion into this. This is written really well and it flows so nicely. This actually reminds me of something that happened to a friend of mine. Thanks for sharing this, it helps me out. 5/5 :) Katie

That was so powerfully written ,it brought a tear to my eye.

Excellent poem, lot of feeling and love in it, 5/5

That was great. The imagery, the power it really flowed and backed up what you were saying. 5/5

That was beautiful, it was like watching a movie, you could see it happening