Ahh, i love it! No one can ever forget that first kiss x

LUV IT & u. 5/5, u should really write more poems. Darin & Wenstone said hi :) LOL

That was really good i think the 1st kiss is special too
keep it up hun! =]
R.A.I.N.E

To me it seemed like the rhyme was pushed. You should try a no-rhyme. The flow might come easier. But I liked your words, and the whole First Kiss thing. It's a good poem, but I'm sure you could make it better.
Keep writing good stuff.
Krystal.

Thanks everyone for they comment!!

Krystal- ill bare that in mind! I no i can do better, I feel am getting better with each one!! thanks again

Ahhh! I LOVE this poem!! I added it to my Favs. Keep it up, i love how this one flows... ;]

I absolutely LOVE how you used the rhyme scheme. Personally, I didn't think it seemed forced at all. I feel completely in love with the poem after the first couple of lines.

Then I fell in love with the meaning behind it and the true-ness (if thats a word...) of that meaning.

Everyone has a first kiss. You can't have a second without a first. And if its with the right person, it can be so magical.

Not only is this about a first kiss EVER, but it could be about a first kiss with your new boyfriend/girlfriend. which is good, because it means there is some versatility.

soo well done. very nice =)

I luv it!!!!!!!!!!! dont let nobody, including that Krystal girl, get you down......... it's the real u, so keep with that flow.

*dawn*
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