As we met that early September night
I loved you at first glance
Nothing ever felt so right
I saw your face and fell into a trance
^^^
Awww the beauty of love at first sight ... A beautiful, magical opening stanza.

Never had I felt an attraction this strong
You took my heart so fast...
In an instant I knew where I belong
and I pray for our love to forever last
^^^
When love pulls two people together ... nothing can stand in their way ... as this stanza proves

Still entrapped within this cage my body is
but my heart and soul are yours to have and to hold
To one day experience eternal bliss
keeps me strong as I struggle in my world so cold
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When the days are cold ... and the nights are dark ... love warms our souls

Your title expresses exactly *What is in your heart and soul* ... and the love shines through this beautiful piece.
A heart warming piece from the soul ... Wonderful read, well done!

Such a beautiful piece Hun...

"Never had I felt an attraction this strong
You took my heart so fast...
In an instant I knew where I belong
and I pray for our love to forever last"

The emotion and feelings expressed were so breathtaking.. I loved the wording of the whole poem and the warm feeling you get when reading it.. Brilliant job again Hun

Ingrid
What a beautiful poem. So heartfelt and very moving.

Never had I felt an attraction this strong
You took my heart so fast...
In an instant I knew where I belong
and I pray for our love to forever last

This stanza really moved me. To love someone this strongly and to be far from them is so painful. Hope all your dreams come true. The imagery in this piece is great!
Love Cindy

Never had I felt an attraction this strong
You took my heart so fast...
In an instant I knew where I belong
and I pray for our love to forever last

Wow...simply breathtaking...beautiful poem...could feel love spilling from every single word.

all the best and take care

Ingrid,
How beautiful the meeting and attraction of the flow of love. You have painted it beautifully in my mind.
Wonderful

Aww i love that last line it ends the poem beautifully with a sense of hope that can last forever, great piece darls xox sam

Very sad romantic poem Ingrid....nice rhyme and flow....

"And as we both fight to survive
parted only in the flesh
Our bond is what keeps us alive
In our hearts our love remains forever fresh "

^how sad to be apart from the one we love....I relate to this verse only too well....very beautiful verses from you....Take care, Debbie

"Never had I felt an attraction this strong
You took my heart so fast...
In an instant I knew where I belong
and I pray for our love to forever last"

These lines hit me the most because they reminded me of a love I once had and it just brought back memories. The whole poem reflected what love is about overall. It was just wonderful. 5/5

Wow wow wow
very lovely sweet poem, it touched my heart, i am happy that i didn't read it until now because i know more about you now and so i can feel what you feel

take care Ingrid
my big sis

Stunning, no other words could come close to describe this. just stunning.

5/5 David