This is a really nice short piece. Filled with so much emotion for so few lines, really expresses your point well.

I think you put across very well how we all suffer envy (regardless of how just/rational it is) at some point in our lives - it's how we deal with it that matters.

This is a really nice poem to read over and over again with, what I think, is a very poignant message.

~Pete.

Wow

really a nice envious poem

u dealt with the topic well

Amazing, I really enjoyed this poem! You express your feelings really well, and I think many of us have been in that situation before. Again, really amazing job, keep up the great work! :)
5/5