Comments : Crystal Shard

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I love this! It is short yet endlessly effective and original, I've never read something like this. Truly effective poem, I like the imagery that you created and dark atmosphere in the piece.
    Breathtaking poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by lifestory

    Wow that was a good poem. i liked it. good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Angela, welcome to our club, I was blown away by the words used here, a fantastic title and words to match, you are definitely gifted, I cannot wait to read more. Timothy r

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    This is really really cool, it's different. I love it :) I would try and see if you can find a better word other than "bloody" cause it would make this piece alot stronger :)
    5.5