It was pretty good, very deep and so true, keep it up

Ooh. simple and pretty. the ONLY thing i can say that MIGHT be not good and can be improved is "favourite" is used twice in a sentence, so its kinda repetitive (which isnt the purpose here like alliteration or anything). besides that its really good and i like it

Repetition adds emphasis to a certain word or idea

I like it soooooo very much it's i'm trying to find the suitable world it's sweet well done

Awsome poem! I adore short poems and this one is so sweet. Great job.