That beautiful and amazing but sad... =[

Another good one. I liked the usage of vocabulary in this one better though. 5/5

PaSsIoNaTe KiSsEs

This experience is always depresssing.
it's happened to mehh once. and only once.
b/c i refuse to let it happen again. "/
there are so many things i regret.
he came for a kiss. but i was scared. so it never happened.
hez moved away now. and while he was here.
we only got together once. and it ended tragically.
but now he's told mehh he did like mehh.
but just. .nothing could happen b/c of his friends.
but he says he wouldve changed that.
and now everyday i have to wonder. .
about what couldve been. "/

good write. 5/5.

Nice poem... only thing is that you might want to break it up in stanzas... i big block of words is overwelming for some people to read. I love it keep it up!
mollie

It was a very emotional piece. Good choice of words. But, there were grammatical errors, and the style of this didn't help much. Maybe if you put this into stanzas, it would look better. 3/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

You still listen to your song....and it seems to make you cry even harder"- yes when slow songs play and its about good relationships i get pissed a little cus it remind me of my ex he basically i wish god would have never created becus it was too many months of a waste but anyways i ca relate to this poem and mostly that line!!!....=).....Good work!!