ZOMG! THis was so touching. I Love the way you convey your emotions into words <3
Keep it up Somethig tells me you got talent. ^^

-Ally

I'm not sure if I like the ending but the poem as a whole blew me away because I could easily relate. I do think you could have expanded on your vocabulary because it seemed to simple but all in all I think it was great. *5/5*