Comments : And.. she wrote once again...

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Welcome back, its been long and i am so glad that you started again. Its such a beautifully written poem, i must admit that your poem did shocked me, this is not how you have been writing..things have changed and changed for good.

    keep writing and keep giving such surprises.

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    The heart learns to suffer,
    and the soul learns to melt.
    You'd see those poems still unwritten,
    if you could feel what she had once felt.

    so emotional

    i lost myself with the images and words of suffering and pain

    keep it up

    good luck

  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very good write it flowed very well. 5/5 all the best wishes ben thompson