Comments : I'm not okay

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    I really liked it for you to have writers block. I like the way you just kept it honest and used great emotion in your words. 5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I thought the clown was a little random, but that just made me love it more.
    For having writters block, this poem was really well written.

    It a very enjoyable read,
    Keep it up,
    --Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    It's a nice poem. no writer's block is there coz it's beautiful

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Nice poem. i thought the clown thing was a lil creepy, but it worked out beautifully.

  • It's a really good poem, but it has a couple of grammatical errors. Fix them and then it'll look great.

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>