I loved this poem, It had an excellent flow
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Great work, I really enjoyed reading this poem
5/5!!

Keep writting ^^

Wow this is good. alot of emotion and its fault. i liked the way you described being left behind. that was cool. nicely put together keep writing

Well this poem was sad, yet very beautiful. The flow fit just right and it was very well written. The emotion was very powerful, but the imagery was a bit off. Good job though!

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This is a nice poem. It's well written, keep it up!!

Yep Yep Yep.
I dont't hear her sorry...lol.
great poem 5/5

I love this song!! its like the best song everrr
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Great work. This poem has good flow and lots of emotion. Another great write.