Comments : I Want

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I Want ...
    Walks beneath the moonlit sky
    to be swept away with romance
    and even when the music ceases
    our hearts to forever dance

    This is my favorite stanza!

    What a romantic you are, Luanne!
    This is beautiful, what more could a woman say to the man she loves????

    hugs,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Loved this poem ^^
    Great job!!
    5/5

    Your and awsum writter
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Very good, I could feel the poem and thats what i like when it pulls me in. Great read.