Aww this is sweet. Great job. 5/5
-vino

Aww this was so cute! i hope you let him read it he would absolutely love it! 5/5 <33

Hiya T.L.T,
I absolutely loved this. The tempo was amazingly smooth, a real joy to read. A superbly written love poem. I hope your man loved it too.
Well done 5/5
Michael
p.s I have written a similar poem 'Phrase of Praise'

Wow, this is really sweet and I can relate to it. A bit cheesy but still enjoyable read, still 5/5!!!

Wow that was completely awsome!!! i give it a 5/5

I like the thing with the butterflys. meaning, the way he made you feel a long time ago, you still feel that way, and love doesn't get boring. lol
Great write from Poetry Knight