Bravo! The only thing I have to say is to look over where you place your periods because to me it seems there should be more. I have to say this is my favorite of yours. :D I love it. You're capturing what I'm trying to do. Something more specific than love or death. You're focusing on something everyone knows about and putting it into beautiful poetry. :) 5 out of 5 my friend.

Congratulations!

Amazing poem I love it
Keep it up!

5/5