I really enjoyed this. The style was different and flowed flawlessly. The message behind it was clear and beautiful. Well done *5/5*

Thats a really good message, I love it :)

The last few lines are just perfect. It's got a understated quality to it. Beautiful, well thought out and nicely put together.

Jemma

Okay really good poem, im not a big fan of this style, but it was good. very true also. i really enjoyed reading it. good work 5/5

Your thoughts on this were well placed. 5/5

Well defied

I am not impressed by this one as much as with your other poems but that is just my opinion.
You have good message and truly fantastic ending but anyway I think that you could say all this on more powerful way.

Think it is a really good poem.
I love the message and the ending is just perfect.
I enjoyed reading this one.
Take caer

The way you structure your poems is unique great, and simple yet so complex
grat job

Ooh, I really liked this. Short but sweet, yeah it is. But the sweet part most definitly. It's Christmas time, (Don't know if you celebrat that but I do.) so this poem makes me realize people are in need, especially around this time of year.

AaWw, that was a cute one. And it is true it does make a difference no matter how small. Kind of like how one person can change the world. Good job.

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