You are right. It wasn't good at all...................................................................................................................................................................................................................It was great. haha Great job. 5/5
-vino

O3o Powerful. My heart started racing about the middle and the tension built. The thump, thump, thump... And then the harsh 'LIES' it makes for excellent buildup. *Catches breath* An excellent, well portrayed poem.

C: Thanks for reviewing my poem by the way, it makes me smile inside when poeple do that.

Oh this is amazing!5/5