Comments : Ready to die

  • 16 years ago

    by Jason

    A short but good poem, although i did not understand what you meant with this part:

    "I'm sick of this toucher and pain"

    mainly the "this toucher" part did know what you meant. lol but good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Whenever you grab hold of a pen and poise it over paper, you work magic with your brilliant mind, bottle of rum, sweet inspiration and pixie dust!!! 5/5

    xD Happy Thoughts xD
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~