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  • What a great poem. I love the rhymming and it was absolutely amazing. This poem reminds me of someone I know. Great write! Going of my favs! 5/5 <---wish I could give it more!

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Geeze. Ajghfdd. I loved it. Your work is always beautiful (:

    First, the poem had a great story behind it. The title really caught me off guard because I didn't know what to expect. Lol. You have great wording and the flow wasn't off at all.
    My favorite lines are-
    "I swear I'm not homeless or a poor ole freak,
    just some problems within and a bruised cheek"

    Overall, great peice. 5.5

    Amber :]]