Great poem, written nicely
a 5/5 from me as u really deserve it

It so sweeet i love it
and the tittle is perfect it deserve 5/5
well done

The last stanza does not have the same rhyming pattern as the others but the feeling is there and consistant throughout the piece. I can almost feel the emotion comming off the poem. i gave it a 5/5 and hope that is is one of many greats for you.