That was beautiful. and sad too.
but that was really amazing and i loved it.
i think this poem really captures the emotion.
and it suck, because evey one goes through
this at least once in their lifetime. :[

amazing write. great piece. 5/5.

This is so good, very touching and emotional

After so long, with cloudless skies
Betrayal fell on this boy's heart
The perfect angel was filled with lies
His feelings were worse than the start

I love that part, i also really like

I give up on trying
Now I see it's true
A broken boy's last will is crying
Was never considered a friend to you
5/5