It's a nice poem though the flow wasn't flowing well all the time

good luck

5/5

Its a nice poem and it would make a good song..i mean if you had a rythem to place the words to but i still liked it 5/5

This is a good poem, although a bit rocky. May need a bit of work on it. It's good though cause that's exactly how I feel towards some of my friends. Good job.

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