Comments : Time.... Lingers by slowly

  • Wow, this is such a beautiful poem. I absolutely loved this poem. The words you chose fit just perfect with the feeling and the flow was just great.

    "Slowly I begin closing my eyes
    Wanting to stare in yours for as long as I can
    But then I give into your kiss
    Not realizing how quickly flew that time span"

    ^This was my fav stanza from the poem. Great job! 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>