Comments : Walking one night

  • 16 years ago

    by InvisibleHourglass

    It is sort of, a sad poem. To me, i wrote it as a reminder of how important the world is, while people just walk by it. The girl (me) is kind of choosing contact and sight of the world over the people in it, so yes, it is sad.

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Wonderfully descripted, of all that is lost to the blind eye that does not want to see. You reach out, to admire, whilst the world leaves you, for its own importance. I read this, and I heard a yearning.. then I read your comment, and I wonder if you simply speak through your poems, as if no-one can hear what you want to say any other way. I am so glad you read m y poem, so that I can now enjoy yours. Well done. xx

    (disappointed = 2 p's)