AW! Omg!
I love this, you did such a good job. It made me cry:P
Really such deep emotions, and a good use of a pathetic fallcy.
Keep it up,
5/5 Paula

Wow, another beautiful story you told. This one was so different from the one I read before but it was still amazing. You are talented both in writing about saddness and about love.

"A fresh flow of tears
blends with the rain."
^my fave lines, they were beautiful.

Well done, I truly enjoyed reading your work. *5/5*