Comments : A Soul for Sale

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "When judgement comes in the face of fury
    With an honest judge and a perceptive jury
    A soul for sale, torn between two infatuations
    A victim of my anger and foolish misinterpretation"

    These lines set a spark inside of me for some reason. It felt like you were really sending a clear and personal message here. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kimberly

    Wow! amazing and deep! Love it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Your soul blooms in darkness my friend.
    nice job.