Comments : Reminisce

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very beautifully written piece. :] a very heartfelt read. and a very powerful write. you captured the emotions very well.

    "So I'm looking through the yearbook
    and obsessing over every page
    graced with your face
    and it's taking me back to a time
    when everything was fine
    and you were almost mine..."

    my favorite lines! :] great write. 5/5.