Comments : O Tears !

  • 16 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    So its christmas eve and its the time of miracles and i wish and hope,ur prayers are heard in the heaven above and santa clause brings ur home a lot of happiness and lot of peace into everyones heart....And as u know,for every soul on this earth,there will always remain an another soul,who will pray day afer day for their happiness....take care and keep smiling always....

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Just never imagined to talk to my tears this way but i just loved the imagination and the message along with desire for a smile....and yes u r worth all the smiles this world has to offer..so be prepared for all smiles coming your way.

    loved ur poem dear, welcome back

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Chavii
    You have done an excellent job on this piece.
    So much emotion packed in so few words.

    Go away O tears
    Go away now,
    Let me dream of happiness
    For which my eyes since long has starved.

    I have lived in these tears for so many years so I know how you are feeling here. Hope the smiles come for you soon.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Dear Chavii,all praises for your excellent piece of work.Although you seem to be sad ,also very positive for good times to come.God bless you with times full of joy.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anisa

    Thts one lovely, soft and sweet poems. Really good! Keep it up! lol cya

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    I like the imagery of the eyes brought to starvation this is very creative great job xox sam

  • 16 years ago

    by mikaella

    It's beautiful ilove the emotion you put into ur writing you should check out my poems lol

  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Good write chavii. i really enjoyed it . all the best ben thompson

  • 16 years ago

    by rocker666chick

    I love it make more!!!
    Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Man this is a great accomplishment. That's good that you are not crying no more. I like this poem 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by despodreamer

    Nice poem...realy deep emotions
    excellent
    luv n luk
    mitali

  • 16 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Fantastic use of repetition, I really loved this poem. Keep up the great work~

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Chavii, such a sombre piece with alot of emotion, meaning and personal feel about it.

    Go away O tears
    Go away now
    I'm tired of entertaining you,
    So do spare my eyes now.
    ^^
    Brilliant opening filled with sadness and inspiration because you want to let go of the tears and the pain. I love the image of entertaining your tears.

    Do not get encouraged by
    my grief and broken heart,
    With smiles and laughs only
    I would welcome you open arms.
    ^^
    I like this because though you have been through grief and broken heart(S) you want to be that happy go person you know ou can be and don't we all? Very relatable. I like the imagery of you opening your arms open to let in happiness - smiles and laughs.

    Go away O tears
    Go away now,
    Let me dream of happiness
    For which my eyes since long has starved.
    ^^
    Beautiful ending and so optimistic that through the pain you want to feel happiness again because your eyes keep crying and have since been starved of everything but pain.

    Em