Awe, this was so sad and so well written. I loved it. Great job!

Awww this is amazing. i like how you wrote this it kinda reminds me of some of my work. greatttt job! keep up the good work! 5/5

This was intense my friend. really nice job.
i hope everything is alright <3
take care!
xox

Aww.. it's sad and very good how u riten it. i really love.Awesome job..

This is good. It flowed nicely.