Your really good.
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Ya it awesome... those ppl are just toopid.=) Great job. keep it up!! =)

Very intriguing. Your words in this piece seem to have a way of drawing me in for a peek of your pain. I feel it. It runs deep. Great write.

LOVE IT!! FAV PART I CAN RELATE TO:Alot of people think I'm okay,
by the happy mask I wear,
but they dont know the price I pay,
for I know the end I fear,

I cant take all the heartbreak,
I pick up my knife.
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