A perfect collab poem with all good writers contibuting there best.
A enjoyable read, well penned.
As dawn's grey light approaches
with leaded heart I find
an empty space beside me
you were a figment of my mind.

Loved this stanza most.

Regards
chavii.

Good to see you are still writing so well
mmmmmmmm big collab huh!!
Guinness book of records.......next???

5/5

Tis a very good collab cindy, yall did great with this one, the flow tis perfect and so tis the grammer, i give it a 5/5 as always!!! keep them coming!!!

That was one of the best love poems ive read in a long time. I know how you feel ive been there the same place as you. very good job i loved it. i give you a 5/5

kasia

Very nicely written club collab....you guys are awesome...

Hey Cindy,

This was a great idea and i just loved this poem. Wow...its like a huge family of poets writing one together, its such a great feeling. Thanks for making me part of this family.

all the best and take care

It turned out beautiful, didn't it, Cindy?

Love,

Ingrid

Very good write. 5/5

Thats a lovely piece wrote by all of you, and whoever wrote the last stanza well done that one really stands out to me with the use of words and the meanings behind them, well doen xox.

Very nice poem!

This is a beauitful poem

I definitely think i kno where ur coming from with this one. its a nice poem. gud job.

You guys took my breath away.

Simply amazing!

I think your night is a lovers night, searching for a lovers morning. Although the night is what i prefer, for our memories of love have no age when we dream