Comments : Rejected

  • Good poem, I really loved it. I felt the hate in it. Although, instead of putting it in the LOVE section, put it in the DARK section. I loved this poem though.

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Good for you that you found someone better that values your love and doesnt take advantage of it. I liked how this was kind of a story and I could follow along nicely. Well done *5/5*