Comments : Time Slowly Turns (Collab with End Of Eternity)

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Living in darkness
    As Time slowly turns
    Reaching for the light
    For your touch I yearn

    Dear Cindy,

    I wish i had words to express the feelings i get when i post a poem with you, never knew that i will get addicted to something so much.

    While writing with you it seems as if i am writing with myself, you are simply amazing.

    Thanks for all the love
    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    A really heart touching love poem, full of deep running emotions. You two write best together.Hope to see more :)

    Love
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Dear Cindy and Nitin,

    You make the most beautiful poems together!
    Keep rocking!!!!

    hugs,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    A wonderful piece you guys always work so well together, well done xox sam

  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very beautiful and sad. outstanding write. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    You guys get better and better with the collabs each time. I can't tell which one of you wrote which lines. Excellent job on this very sad piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, i love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Namida

    This is a really great piece. The two of you did really well, and you can't tell who wrote what. I especially like this passage,

    "Colors seem to fade
    In this book of life
    Still searching those pages
    For a reason to survive"

    it really gave me a clear picture. Great job, keep it up. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    Such a beautiful write ,and very heart touching too.

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Another proof of your talent, but also of your sorrows, that you both convey beautifully together.. your eternal optimisms, that by expressing it, it can be dealt with. Well done. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    That was so beautiful, yet it also felt kind of sad. It's another great work from such an amazing poet. I really enjoyed it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Oh my god, That's amazing O_O
    5/5 -Liz.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice, very touching
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    That was very amazing and also sad best wishes your a very talented writer