Comments : One foot in the water and one foot on the sand

  • 16 years ago

    by Tony

    A bit of a departure from your previous poems but still very strong.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    Love the poem Fran, well written, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    Oh thank goodness - an adult! And a fine writer too in the bargain. Wonderful writing, Fran. I'm off to check out some more of yours! I hope you'll read some of my other poems as well.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nikoshiana

    Very good piece, i enjoyed this peom so much, so well written